The Sensation on the Black Desk

  

    On my dad's black work desk, there are several white circular treats. They don't get consumed very often, but he has them there. I took one of the treats myself and observed it. It has a typical plastic packing that is flexible and crinkles easily, and you hear the distinct crinkling noise in your hand. Dropping the treat is not unbreakable, but it is stiff and makes a solid noise when dropped against a hard surface like the desk in my room. A white color on the treat is simple. It has some raised letters as the branding and is circular with a small hole in the middle, similar to a donut. Consuming the treat takes some force to chew it down, but once you do, it will get a strong flavor afterward, and it makes the breath smell nice. It is not sweet, but it has a very distinct taste. 

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  1. It is good to see you have Entry #3 posted, Vincent. You have some good moments of detial, but they are not developed as much as your reader would like and needs to engage more completely. Keep working at it. Missing entries 4, 5, & 6. Don't forget to number your entries.

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